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Aaliya's avatar

Really enjoyed this one ❤️❤️❤️

Esther Stanway-Williams's avatar

Made me chuckle!

The Inconvenient Ironist's avatar

A foot in the absurdist camp here. Funny. I love it.

Phillip Slater's avatar

I’ve got more than one foot in that camp. Thanks for reading.

Marlana aka Outtamydamnmind's avatar

This is brilliant starting with a simple itch and ending as a frog is pure playful chaos. I love how you turn the mundane into something completely unexpected. 🐸✨

Phillip Slater's avatar

Thanks. I love your feedback.

Marlana aka Outtamydamnmind's avatar

I love your work 😊

Zoe Mazah's avatar

It’s too funny I love it. And what an annoying sensation a itchy nose really is.

John Jakob's avatar

Humorous

Tanja Harej's avatar

I like it and it’s ver nice poem! 😊

Michèle Breton's avatar

What a wonderful poem! Definitely had me laughing! 😁

Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Now after reading it a second time if there is a hidden message 🤣

Hina Gondal's avatar

Annoying🫣