Voodoo Child…

[Ruth O'Reilly]

Really enjoyed this Phil - liked how it felt like poetry at the start, then became prose as you built up the suspense & momentum here. You have such a skill for how you mix light & dark of mood. I love that line about the voodoo dog 🐕 ha,ha

[Phillip Slater]

Thanks Ruth. I liked that line as well. So much I used it twice ☺️.

[B Philippe]

Brilliant story, inspired by one of The coolest songs - I’m always very happy when this one comes on.

And always very happy when I’m reading your work. Thank you for all you do.

[Phillip Slater]

Thanks for reading.

[Jeannine Lawall]

This is fantastic! I sure hope she gets her voodoo dog someday...

[Phillip Slater]

Thanks Jeannine. I hope she does as well.

[Gaby Brogan]

I love the strong voice in this! It shines through the page (or the screen, in this case haha). Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

[Phillip Slater]

Thanks for reading Gaby.

[Zoe Mazah]

Reading you was really good. I’ve always been a Hendrix fan. His songs been the soundtrack to an intense time in my life. Good days and terrible nights. Hendrix had the right tone and sound for me

[Phillip Slater]

Thanks Zoe. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Joseph Young]

I also figured it was going to be the dad--so much more satisfying it was the mom. Thanks, Phillip.

[Phillip Slater]

Thanks Joseph.

[Esther Stanway-Williams]

Ooo, this was a good read. With a surprising end…thought it was going to be the dad putting in that knife, SO much better that it was her mum. Will share 👌

[Phillip Slater]

Thanks for reading Esther.

[Michele Breton]

Great story Phillip! I got right into it and had no idea what was going to happen at the end! Exciting ending! Thanks! ✨

[Phillip Slater]

Thanks Michele.

[Brenda - A Voice that Wonders]

Well this was something else. Really good Phillip. This was touching. ❤

[Phillip Slater]

Thanks Brenda. Glad you liked it.